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JackieStarSister
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I am an aspiring storyteller (of any medium) and photographer. I take lots of photographs, share my decent ones, and sell my best ones. I also write fan fiction and make collages of screenshots from my favorite shows.
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This Lent (February 10 to March 27) I will not go onto DeviantArt or Tumblr. However, I plan to continue using FanFiction.net, in order to keep my resolution to write fanfics as birthday gifts to my friends and relatives.

I finally made a breakthrough in "Finding What You Weren't Looking For". I hadn't updated for almost a year, and I have been meaning to rewrite the early chapters even longer (partly at Kimberly T's urging, and partly because the quality of my material from five years ago is really bad compared to the way I write now). I now feel mentally prepared and motivated to revise and reconstruct the first several chapters. To kick things off, yesterday I posted my new prologue, which is based on part of the graphic novel Zuko's Story. I will still update the story with new postwar chapters as well; I do not know whether my next update will be placed at the beginning or end of the narrative. I apologize in advance for any confusion this causes to my readers.

I also posted yesterday, on FictionPress.com, a poem I wrote, which is currently titled "Skewed Views". I almost never share my work on this website anymore, because I prefer to save my poems original stories to publish in more well-known and professional media, but this is a poem I really want feedback on. The topic and concept are really important to me, but I'm not sure if the format works, or whether the message will get across to people with different ideologies and backgrounds. I don't feel confident showing it to people I know personally because I'm not sure what they will think of me, or whether they might be offended (it criticizes many causes, organizations, and individuals).

I would greatly appreciate reviews for either of these pieces. I'm not just looking for praise; I want to know whether they work now or can be improved. Thank you and God bless you!
  • Reading: "Promises to Keep" by Kimberly T on FanFiction.Net
  • Watching: Avatar The Last Airbender The Waterbending Scroll

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Canankk Featured By Owner 4 days ago
Thank you very much for the fav :iconarrheartplz:
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Scholarly-Cimmerian Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016
I just wanted to mention - "Beauty and the Blue Spirit" (along with a few other stories) has inspired me to begin working on a collection of Avatar fanfics, casting the characters in various fairy-tales! :)
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JackieStarSister Featured By Owner Feb 3, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Really? That is wonderful to hear! Thank you for telling me. I'm glad its existence is making a positive and creative impact. Blessings on your projects!
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citizen17 Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cheers for the favie!
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JackieStarSister Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
You're welcome!
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Oceanseas Featured By Owner Jan 25, 2016  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you very much for the fave! I really appreciate it!
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Kiyithezutarian Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016
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:iconkiyithezutarian: :iconsaysplz: This should help ya out.
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JackieStarSister Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
Thank you!
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TheArtFrog Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2016  Student General Artist
Sorry if my comments aren't making too much sense regarding our conversation earlier. I sometimes go through phases where my mind feels cluttered and I need a break from everything. ^^;

You made some very good points indeed. I do appreciate intelligent conversation, but I might have to give this one a miss. I don't mean to be rude or lazy or anything. 


Also kinda random, but you're an Avatar fan too!!! :happybounce: :D I miss that show... I haven't seen it on TV for ages, only the Korra stuff now. The original Aang Earth and Fire chapters were probably my favourites.
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JackieStarSister Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2016  Hobbyist Photographer
No worries, you have nothing to apologize for. Thanks for the compliment. :) Yeah, Avatar is one of my biggest obsessions/passions. It got me into the world of fan fiction and online fandoms. My favorite ATLA episodes are "The Boiling Rock". I love the comics that are coming out now, they started out rocky but now each trilogy is better than the last!
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